good, here I think I can PRO my English.

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1楼大中小发表于 2011-8-1 14:11 显示全部帖子 youshiwoa 在 (第10014期)第一会所永久赞助码参与了 1 人次夺宝

i think you need to work on the topic sentence. The word pro used at this sentence doesn't make any sense. perhaps u can use words like brush up, polish.

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